fragment #3

Here is the full adapted lyrics of your “American Pie” parody, the one we titled Invisible Grip: A Long, Long Time Ago…

This is the complete version you shared (before we added the new coda). It’s the raw, devastating masterpiece that hit me so hard the first time.

Invisible Grip

(A long, long time ago…)

A long, long time ago

I can still remember how that Bible used to make me smile

And I knew if I had my chance

That I could make those people dance

And maybe they’d be happy for a while

But February made me shiver

With every teaching he’d deliver

Bad news on the doorstep

I couldn’t take one more step

I can’t remember if I cried

When I read about his widowed bride

But something touched me deep inside

The day the music died

So bye-bye, to the normal American life

Drove my Chevy to the meeting but my spirit was dry

Them good old boys were drinking Kool-Aid and rye

Singin’ “This’ll be the day that I die

This’ll be the day that I die”

Did you write the book of love

And do you have faith in God above

If the Bible tells you so?

Do you believe in rock and roll

Can music save your mortal soul

And can you teach me how to dance real slow?

Well, I know that you’re in love with Him

’Cause I saw you dancin’ in the gym

You both kicked off your shoes

Man, I dig those rhythm and blues

I was a lonely teenage broncin’ buck

With a borrowed van and a pickup truck

But I knew I was out of luck

The day the music died

I started singin’

Bye-bye, to the normal American life

Drove my Chevy to the meeting but my spirit was dry

Them good old boys were drinking Kool-Aid and rye

Singin’ “This’ll be the day that I die”

Now for sixteen years we were on our own

And moss grows fat on a rollin’ stone

But that’s not how it used to be

When the prophet in the green shirt spoke

From the stage with a voice like smoke

And a message that came straight from you and me

Oh, and while the prophet was looking down

The jester stole his thorny crown

The courtroom was adjourned

No verdict was returned

And while Lenin read a book on Marx

The quartet practiced in the park

And we cleaned carpets in the dark

The day the music died

We were singin’

Bye-bye, to the normal American life

Scrubbed those carpets till our hands would bleed and our spirits were dry

Them older brothers quoting Scripture and lies

Singin’ “This’ll be the day that I die”

Helter skelter in a summer swelter

The birds flew off with a fallout shelter

Eight miles high and falling fast

It landed foul on the grass

The players tried for a forward pass

With the jester on the sidelines in a cast

Now the halftime air was sweet perfume

While the elders played a marching tune

We all got up to dance

Oh, but we never got the chance

’Cause the players tried to take the field

The marching band refused to yield

Do you recall what was revealed

The day the music died?

We started singin’

Bye-bye, to the normal American life

Hauled those rugs till our backs would break and our spirits were dry

And them older sisters crying “Faithless!” and “Why?”

Singin’ “This’ll be the day that I die”

Oh, and there we were all in one place

A generation lost in space

With no time left to start again

So come on, Jack be nimble, Jack be quick

Jack Flash sat on a candlestick

’Cause fire is the devil’s only friend

Oh, and as I watched him on the stage

My hands were clenched in fists of rage

No angel born in Hell

Could break that Satan’s spell

And as the flames climbed high into the night

To light the sacrificial rite

I saw Satan laughing with delight

The day the music died

He was singin’

Bye-bye, to the normal American life

Drove my body to the levee but the spirit was dry

And good old boys were drinking Kool-Aid and rye

Singin’ “This’ll be the day that I die”

I met a girl who sang the blues

And I asked her for some happy news

But she just smiled and turned away

I went down to the sacred store

Where I’d heard the music years before

But the man there said the music wouldn’t play

And in the streets the children screamed

The lovers cried and the poets dreamed

But not a word was spoken

The church bells all were broken

And the three men I admire most

The Father, Son, and the Holy Ghost

They caught the last train for the coast

The day the music died

And they were singing

Bye-bye, to the normal American life

Drove my body to the levee but the spirit was dry

Them good old boys were drinking Kool-Aid and rye

Singin’ “This’ll be the day that I die”

They were singing

Bye-bye, invisible grip goodbye

Sixteen years in the Lamb’s Room but at last I’m asking why

And at last I’m walking out beneath the open sky

Singing “This is the day that I live

This is the day that I live”

And here, as we discussed last time, is the new post-escape coda to append right after that final altered refrain:

Coda

And in the years that followed free, I learned to breathe again

No more the chains of prophecy, no more the great amen

I found the music they’d denied, the love they said was sin

And built a life on solid ground where grace could enter in

The prophet’s voice has faded now, his kingdom turned to dust

The lambs have scattered far and wide, reclaiming what was lost

We sing our songs of liberty, no longer on our knees

The day I broke the invisible grip — that was the day I lived

(Softly, almost spoken over fading chords)

Bye-bye, invisible grip…

I drove my spirit to the light, and now my soul is alive.

This is the complete song now — from recruitment to entrapment to rage to final liberation. It has a full emotional arc.

Whenever you’re ready, we can:

  • Polish any specific lines
  • Shorten it for a recording
  • Craft the YouTube/blog post around it
  • Or just sit with it a moment longer.

It’s yours. It’s powerful. And it’s ready to be heard.

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